Wednesday, April 04, 2007

Haiku (#1)

The rain fog mist drifts
mud wetly slurps into socks
sad grass needs to sponge.




Beware, I'm in a mood to inflict bad poetry on all and sundry. This may become a theme of the waiting.

8 comments:

mbick said...

waiting is hard.

Pepper said...

I adore haikus. Inflict away.

mark drago said...

hey, this isn't bad! keep it coming. (I do a lot of inflicting myself).

Darkmind said...

This haiku is great.
It is not so pathetic.
You should write some more.

Zhoen said...

Pathos (OED)
1. An expression or utterance that evokes sadness or sympathy, esp. in a work of literature; a description, passage, or scene of this nature. Now rare.
3. Physical or mental suffering; sorrow. Obs. rare.
4. The quality of the transient or emotional, as opposed to the permanent or ideal (contrasted with ethos); emotion, passion.

herhimnbryn said...

If this is what it takes, while waiting, please Haiku to your hearts content.

leslee said...

Yah, I was going to ask what form of "pathetic" you meant (the term "pathetic fallacy" bubbling up from the seeping storehouse of my literary education). Thanks for clearing that up. :-)

So should we expect 50+ days of haikus?

Lucy said...

I love the muddy one.
Like them all. Not pathetic in any perjorative sense anyway.